Set out the initial plot of an anime, others reply with what happens next, or how it ends.
Top level comments for premises, direct replies for the rest of the story.
if you don't like the way a story is going, feel free to reply to earlier comments and branch off the story from there.
Heres a very short shitty example:
New Rule: No Respawn.
Shizuyuki, a male protagonist of the story, is one of rare that seemingly stands unaffected by the grand takeover and seeks out to end this sudden "apocalypse".
Shizuyuki is hiding out in an abandoned hotel. All he can hear are the screams and grunts of the now deranged flock of men running through the streets. Looking out the window he sees a group of them fighting over a sausage on the ground, Shizuyuki grasps his own sausage tightly, thankful he is still unaffected and his hasn't fallen off yet.
As Shizukyuki grabs his sausage firmly, he looks back on the first day of the "Apocalypse". During that day, all of the woman fall into a state of coma while all the men's sausage fall off. No one knows a clue why or how that happen but one thing for sure, men is fighting over their sausage...
For their sausages are symbols of their status in the new world. Without their sausages they would fall into deep coma like the women.
In a far away place, there's a group of 'woman' gather at an abandoned building. "Damn it! Never have I imagined that I be a futanari(shemale) in my life" said the girl with a red bob haircut hair.
"Akane! Stop holding your sausage already...you have to accept that that is part of your body" said a tall femine girl with long straight blue hair.
"Accept it!?! I don't even know who's sausage is this in the first place...kyaa, it's embarassing to speak about. Don't remind me of that, Aoi!" reply Akane as she cover her face out of embarassment.
MC has hair so crazy its stupid.
It rains, MC dies of a cold. But his hair lives on and takes up position as MC; Mc hair-kun.
MC Hair-kun’s best friend is Afro-chan.
Yusa-chan, to her dismay has done nothing with her life but earned a very well deserved nick-name; Afro-chan. No matter what she does she always wakes up in the morning with an afro on her head, and some toast in her mouth, thankfully no ones caught on about the toast yet.
Afro-chan has been good friends with with hair-kun for a long time now, they connected over both being bullied regarding their ridiculous hair.
But hair-kun has had enough, he witnessed Yusa-chan being bullied after school yet again, and he couldn't run away any longer. Hair-kun jumps in and ends up killing 2 of the bullies.
Afro-chan and Hair-kun are now on the run from the police.
As they were surrounded by the police. Hair-kun and Afro-chan GATTAI!!!(docks) Hair-kun replace Afro-chan's hair with itself and it grows long enough to reach the ground.
With the new hair, Afro-chan swings her hair as created a gush of wind out of it, knocking back all the police that surrounded her. She uses this chance to escape and went into hiding.
But then as she slipped into a back alley, Afro-chan is confronted by a group of gangsters called the slick backs. "oioioi, where are you going, little miss? Are you one of the mullet gang's girls?"
before afro-chan can respond, the slick-back's leader comes out and inspects her. A tall, thin man with purple ornate clothing and a cane emerges from the crowd of angry gangsters with a strange yet intriguing dialect. He looks at her with piercing eyes as though he were appraising a piece of valuable merchandise and asks her, "do you know who i am?"
with a calm expression, she responds, "uh, no i don't believe so" as her eyes drift from his shoulders to his boots.
he responds, "you may refer to me as 'a pimp named slick-back'. these here goons are my slick-backs. You can tell cuz dey got slick-backs."
...
A young woman, Amachi Ameko, who's coped with strange powers all of her life, learns that she's the daughter of an elder god of storms.
(i'm an artist so i might draw this. make it good, anilist citizens)
Ameko-san, despite the strange occurances surrounding her, did her best to live a peacefull life. Her, father Susano-o, did not take this selfish wish of hers kindly and prepared a plan to send her on an adventure.
She reluctantly sets off, and thus delves into an "in-between", limbo-like place where the world of the supernatural and human world mesh and blur together.
Then, she met a a girl named Shiron, a strange girl with rainbow hair. It turns out that Shiron is the daughter of Susano-o to the goddess of calamity.
Shiron convinces Amachi to work at a cafe for the gods, which turns out to be an underground brothel. She is violated endlessly for the rest of her days.
-_- or so she thinks until she is saved by Aikawa Tarou. He turns out to be the son of the godess Ame-no-Uzume and another mortal man. Seeing how similar his situation is to hers, Ameko decides to follow him in his quest, though she doesn't yet know what it is exactly he is looking for!
A long long time ago, in a galaxy far far away... There was a planet called Earth. It's life forms were somewhat advanced but far too barbaric for our hero, for he was the sole survivor of the Sleigians. His home world was anihilated by a wandering black hole and he was the only one to manage to escape in time. He was now on his way to earth.
Akatsuki wakes up in a vast white desert to find out like all the people in the world as fresh corpses around him,
Shaking with fear, Akatsuki slowly attempts to stand & face this nightmarish land. Only to be aghast by the state of his own body! He is missing certain fingers & chunks of his flesh are missing along his legs...but he doesn't feel a thing.
Just as he was about to yell for his little brother, suddenly...
He noticed a pale figure slowly walking towards him. The man seemed to have a broken leg and his right arm seemed to also be injured. Glad to finally see someone alive, he started running towards the man. However, upon getting closer, Akatsuki notices a certain detail that made him very wary of the man.
The man was clad in a rugged white cloak and turban, with a rugged beard and face to match. Akatsuki slowed his pace and approached with caution.
"H-hello?" Akatsuki managed to called out, ever so vigilant. He had no memory of this man either.
At this distance, he was now noticing that the man had long, gnarly and dirty misshaped fingernails. Akatsuki turned his gaze again to the man's half shadowed face. The man had turned towards him; towards the piercing white sun. He looked about and awkwardly grasped out as if searching for something. His eyes were a dull milky white. He was blind.
''Wh-Who are you?'' He asked again.
'' Can you hear me? do you understand what I say?'' But the old man gave no answer. All he did was slowly walk towards him.
''Maybe he's also blind'' Akatsuki thought.But suddenly a voice said to him
'' Oh don't worry young fella. I can Hear you quite well ! I am merely a bit too old to hold a conversation at such a distance.'' He then realized the voice came from behind.
'' We just wanted to see if you were one of Them but it seems to be the exact opposite. You're a Slayer aren't you?''
In shock of his surroundings and the old men, Akatsuki began fingering the knife in his left pocket, ignoring the handle digging into a wound in his hand. His hand slimy from nervous sweat and quivering, he clutched the pendant tightly against his chest. He tried to call out again, but his throat was so dry he only choked and coughed. His eyes wide and still sputtering, he collapsed back onto one of the many corpses strewn across the sand. He heard a sickening crack as he landed in the cavity of the desecrated body. He was quaking violently now and his breathing quickened, his eyes even wider.
"H-h-help..." he managed. He began to go into a brown out and wheeled about in the desert sun, oblivious to the men. He began to feel very sick to his stomach.
(I believe horror to be my weak link, so I'm practicing haha. I was also driving for the man to be rather creepy and ominous, but sure thing)
(rain demigoddess OP; wtf happened to that thread and why did that person make it so grimdark and EDGY XD like. whho would ruin something that had so much potential to be pure and fun and celebratory of humanity. and i was just drawing a promo for ameko's journey.. :(( here's another one. please no rape or death for shock value, thanks.)
A nonbinary sorceror has to disguise xemself as a high school student to track down a powerful demon.
And so, Makoto leaves his house to go to his new school. He goes there in order to find the Ongyo-Ki hiding at school, devouring souls all around the city. He was hired by The Association to track and kill the beast as discretely as possible. However the task would prove quite difficult for Ongyo-Ki are known for their high level illusion spells ...
To gain more knowledge about the demon, Makoto first need to know about the school. He sees a girl wearing a school uniform gaze upon the school as she has never seen a school before. Makoto decided to greet her.
"Hello there!" said Makoto. The girl was surprised by the sudden voice and Makoto quickly apologized for it. "I wanted to ask about this school, guess I got the wrong person to ask eh?" said Makoto. The girl giggles. She then look up in the sky and said to herself "I wonder what kind of adventure my father plan for me"
Before the girl left, Makoto ask her her name in which she reply "My name is Amachi Ameko! See you in class tomorrow!"
[I kinda like the character Amachi and feel its a waste to stop her story]
( ok you are awesome for bringing her back xD I'll make sure she doesn't get a Bad End like last time =3 )
Feeling the mysteriously powerful aura surrounding Ameko, Makoto briefly thought about asking her for some help but this thought was quickly driven away by his pride. '' I'll find this demon my self'' he thought. He then set off to find his classroom when he suddenly felt something was off. He was standing in a hallway crowded with students. Then he noticed what was disturbing him.
@llame took one of your ideas, the race and the guy and black hole/his situation etc. Help develop this if you feel.
This is more my strong suit. Gritty SciFi and fantasy.
The Sleigians were renowned throughout the known galaxy as great scholars and their skills in the arts were unparalleled. Though they were fine craftsmen and artisans, they did not partake in production of the machines of battle, for they were a peace loving race and knew not of the horrors and atrocities of war.
The year is 2131. There are four sprawling factions in the known universe at this time.
-Earth (renamed to Protox), a corrupt "Republic for the People" always reaching out forming webs of alliances and political landscapes, as well as colonies for military and resource purposes to further the fires of the massive amounts of industry and wealth created during this time, predominated and governed by the human race, the relatively new and growing competitor/big kid on the block.
-Symbious, a totalitarian monarchy with a primary and ancient dynasty, along with many houses of nobles. Prided most for their unparalleled warriors, advances into technologies, unknown sciences and military conquests, they are constantly balancing the political map with Protox, their proclaimed and recognized mortal enemies.
-Xaxalius, the most mysterious race to the outside, inspiring many urban legends. It is known that they are advanced, intelligent and able to conduct conversation and trade, though few tend to deal with them. They are a parasitic race, who take over their hosts via the brain and submerging the host in a surrounding layer of black liquid. It is heard that they have no need for subordinates and wipe out entire planets full of life. However, they resemble the Symbians and are even said to be a subrace of them. They tend to be on much friendlier terms with the Symbian Empire.
-lastly, the nomadic warlords and hordes of the Loganites. Ruled by the strongest and the most fierce and warlike. They are very unpredictable and occasionally cease warring together when leading warlords and chiefs become ambitious and band together for campaigns into the "civilized quadrants" to take as they please. On many an occasion, Symbious and Protox have had to band together for temporary alliances, though the Loganites mostly involve themselves with various other powers on the other side of the galaxy.
Before the rise of Protx, Symbious had always been sitting pretty on it's throne as the overwhelmingly dominant power in this region of the galaxy. A long history since 2075 has occurred, but the most recent events can be summed up- Protox has embarrassed Symbious in multiple wars, the most recent of which being the most devastating for it. Symbious is currently under temporary military occupation by Protox, all of it's territory that Protox had fought in being liberated from the tyranny of the empire and it's crown prince Aitor turned traitor, his sister, Afelii, the next in line in hiding with her forces and armies plotting.
Though Toxus, father of Aitor and Afelii, has been killed, many high ranking generals continue the war on various fronts in the empire, notable ones being Gyrozen, Lambert, Kixus and Orudraphilii. These four are steadfast loyal to the continuing dynasty, vowing to themselves to restore Afelii's dynasty, her preparing to lead the front with new strategic and tactical tactics and unknown weapons.
Symbious and Protox locked into a military stalemate involve many who wish not to partake in their conflicts, as is a common theme of war.
The Symbians are now able to form and harness black holes to their advantage, something entirely bizarre and unheard of until now. Until it was used on a huge storage facility of Protox resources, located on Sleigys. The near constant warring of the powers had never been a prevalent issue for the Sleigians, whose only involvement was occasionally changing the banner they were under.
Now it is the issue of our hero (can't come up with a name, haven't figured out specifics of culture in this race) and it weighs heavily upon his mind, many nights being sleepless. His race and planet have been obliterated and he has lost hope that any of his kind yet remain.
It has been five months since this tragic event and he has gotten in with a band merchants heading to Earth/Protox, the heart of the Republic and economic powerhouse. He has the bare necessities such as food, lodging and a ship and has been in training with his newfound crew and friends in the ways of commerce, trade and economics. (In which you guys take liberty in, who the crew are. Make it a balanced and interesting group, try to make some diverse races with backgrounds etc)
Nearly arrived and waiting in the atmosphere for clearance, it has been heard that civil unrest and Symbian terrorist attacks have been common as of late. Hence they are about to be boarded and cleared by Protox military police.
you guys get to see one of two larger worlds/writings I'm interested in/have created with DJJJ
as well as where Gyrozen comes from
take liberties and ideas, I've got notebooks full of significant figures, timelines, races and events etc.
if anyone wishes to contact me about it, kurt.schrage331 on Skype, would love to see what you have to say about it
many things not fully flushed out
world/setting/background development is paramount for me as you can tell. That was a very light summary of a few things.
(Very quick, light, not flushed out and rushed)
We have many actual flushed out stories in regards to this presented setting, which is our hope for you all to do. For those of you who write or aspire to. Just tell either of us about it/them. Lol
That plus continuing and/or adding much needed development/revision of this one specifically. Ask about any current details. Etc
Sheighar was sitting in the back of the small trade ship. He looked at his new companions and once again thought how lucky he was to have been accepted after the destruction of his home-planet. He thought of his now dead family and friends and felt sadness as well as his anger well up inside of him.
'' Don't worry. It's normal to cry after such events.'' Agneysia was like him. She was the one who convinced the rest of the crew to take Sheighar with them. When the crew of the Red Moon Hound found her, she was in hibernation inside a gigantic block of ice. She didn't remember how she got in it but knew somehow that that block of ice was all that remained of her planet. She didn't say any more than that and Sheighar knew better than to pry.
She sat down next to him and stared at the wall in front of them, letting an awkward silence set in. She looked a lot like a humanoid with her small eyes, nose and mouth. She had long red hair with two cute little feline ears. Her hair was separated by a long tail covered with carmine red spikes.
''You know, you should thank her ! If it weren't for her you'd probably be dead by now !'' Said a man's voice coming from the next room.
( >_< I seriously did my best on her ! Also I can't wait to see where this will go =3)
Oh! I forgot this was an anime premise. I knew we'd get a neko alien!! (I'll continue this later lol busy today)
Sheighar thought for a moment and asked himself why he wept. He had grown very hardened and bleak inside and accepted the reality as it was now.
He had spent what he thought to be his last stroke of generosity on recovering Agneysia and contemplated telling her that her planet had been devastated by Protox and Symbian thermofusion warheads, the majority of her race and their cities and infrastructure annihilated.
He considered telling her what had happened, but given her personality (she wore her heart on her sleeve) who knows what her reaction would be? He felt like he owed her for both giving him some humanity in saving her and in her convincing the crew to take him on. He wished her no pain similar to the one he had grown numb to.
The Protox military police ship, much larger than their merchant ship, rocked the hull as it coupled itself in order to board. They were in artificial atmospheric gravity, made for safety precautions, since engines and motors at this point were easily powerful enough to surpass the extra gravity. It still however, made it more difficult for ships to escape.
In marching unison, eight Protox soldiers marched in a single file line to the control room of the ship. They wore all black, black gasmasks, black helmets and black vests and other gear. They were armed with automatic rifles.
"Form a line with your hands on the wall!" requested one of the soldiers. "Please!" he added abruptly.
The crew were in a nervous and confused state as they scrambled to get in place.
"Identifications, please!" a prominent voice commanded.
There was an issue. Aygnesia and Sheighar had no Protox I.D. left, on account of the confusion. They had no chance to have any made in the last five months.
Sheighar quickly realized this. He was running through his mind all of the possibilities that would allow him to escape but found none that wouldn't require him to reveal his hidden ace.
The Sleigians possessed advanced technologies that every civilization envied. Their latest breakthrough in DNA manipulation consisted in a device that lets you modify it on the go and discretely. He possessed the first and only prototype of it, his father being the inventor of the device. The only problem was that he needed an opportunity to access the terminal implanted in his arm and could not do so without alerting the guards. He wanted to change the tone of his voice and the look in his eyes to manipulate their weak minds. After all Humans are known for being mentally weak and slow.
Sheighar then noticed a small noise coming from right next to him. It was Bartz rhythmically tapping the wall with his fingers. ''It's Morse code!'' he thought. Sleigians have a natural knack for learning languages and so most of them had at the least basic knowledge of a vast majority of the used languages of the galaxy.
Bartz's message was short and said just one thing '' I can help with your plan''
( -_- took me some time to figure things out here. I'm not used to write and even less so in english but I'm really enjoying it so far =3)
Sheighar began rhythmically tapping back.
"Should I use the DNA manipulator?"
Bartz, a Voruxus, looked at him in utter confusion. He furrowed his brow.
"You bought this off of a Symbian, correct?" he tapped.
The Protox soldiers started on the left side and first searched their captain, a human named Andrew Smith. (Large MC of many other stories)
"Yes" responded Sleighar.
Bartz began tapping faster, harder and louder. The soldiers were nearly upon them and had searched a few others before reaching Agneysia. A soldier began patting her down and tilted her chin up.
"Heh. May take you with us" he said sarcastically. The nearby soldiers cracked up and laughed roughly as another snickered and began opening crates with a crowbar.
"Get rid of it. Get rid of it." Bartz tapped furiously.
Sleighar fumbled about frantically with the device in the sleeve of his clothing. It tumbled out and clattered on the ground noisily. The soldier with the crowbar and two other soldiers immediately raised and aimed their weapons.
"DOWN! DOWN! DOWN!" one of the soldiers ordered. They began closing in and forming a semi circle.
One soldier cautiously squatted down whilst still aiming and picked up the device. He flipped up his mask to get a closer look and a flash of rage ignited in his eyes as he threw it down and crushed it with the heel of his boot.
"It was made on Symbious..." he muttered as he turned to the others.
Captain Smith, who was usually reserved and quiet, very distant from his crew, began sweeping along the left and behind of the line of soldiers.
"Th- they're a bunch a GOD DANGED SYMBIAN TERRORI-" began one soldier. He collapsed onto his knees and fell forward. Before the rest even got their bearings, Captain Smith had taken his rifle and swept up with the butt on the next man's chin, his head snapping back with a "GAH!"
Idk if you'd get the notification for me responding to that. Lol
Nope -_- I just noticed.
I'm still thinking though..
Oh snap, lore time?? His father stole or traded Symbian technology? Oh snap, backplot spinoff, story of his father working with Symbian scientists etc during one of the wars in secrecy. Also keep in mind that there are no good guys in this story (besides MCs, most times) As a matter of fact, nearly everyone is meh or bad/fairly evil. The DNA manipulator you came up with. (Remember, they're the scientific related ones) that's gonna get him in big trouble with Protox police xD
O-O oops did not pay attention there... I just thought that since the sleigians are scholars I could just mess with that a bit.. -.- did not expect it to back fire like that though
The end.
That was how it all began for Tetsu Amamiya, he never thought he would meet his end on his way to school that day. Never did he find out what hit him, a car perhaps? It was the only thing he could think of that could have ended it all so quick for him. But the last thing he felt on his skin wasn't metal, wasn't cold, it wasn't even moving, it was warm, and comforting, it felt like life itself had touched him.
Tetsu awoke to darkness, an echoing silence. In the distance a pale white haired girl stood holding a sign "Welcome to The End, enjoy your stay."
The first thing he thought when he look at the sign, "Take that, Atheist! There's world after death!!! Damn, that feel good"
'' Hey we never said there couldn't be anything! '' a voice said in the distance. ''It's just that we only believe what we see !''. The voice came closer and Tetsu could distinguish a manly silhouette coming closer. '' I've been walking for hours to find someone but all I could see is that strange girl whom I could never seem to get close to....''
'' Ah, I forgot to introduce my self. My name is Haris. Haris Totle, pleased to meet you!'' he said with a gentle smile.
Tetsu just stare at Haris for a while, look down as he trying to search for something. He picked up a sharp-looking rock and stab Haris without hesitation.
"Ackk!!! What was that for!?!?" scream Haris when his gentle smile is replied with a stab to the heart. Tetsu apologized and tells him that he was curious if there was an afterlife after afterlife. Seeing Haris is still standing even after a hole in his chest which was slowly recovering answered his curiosity.
"Well then, shall we get going?" said Tetsu with a smile. "Ohh, okay...let's go and LIKE HELL I SAID THAT!!!! DAFUQ DUDE!?!?! YOU DON'T JUST STAB PEOPLE IN THE HEART, YOU JUST DON'T!!!" yell Haris but the yelling was pointless as Tetsu leave him already heading towards the white haired girl who seem so close yet so far....