I don’t feel it’s all that confusing, and further I don’t get many of the critiques i’m seeing. It’s a damn straightforward series, with pleasant characters and an engaging plot.
Though for critiques, I do find most of the characters fairly shallow, the power system and socio-dynamic between the Earth and Moon to be not all too well explored, the occasional plot-point or circumstance not being very well described, and the random time skips a bit jarring…
Of course it’s not without room for critique, but I don’t feel every short story needs these elements full described.